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Thursday, September 20, 2012

A Heart Not Easily Broken Release Party!!!

Yes! It's finally here! The release of my debut novel, A HEART NOT EASILY BROKEN!

Four years....

That's how long it took me to take a suggested hobby and turn it into more than I ever expected it to be...

Thank you to my family, all of my friends, old, and the new ones I've met along the way, for your support!!!! I would never have gotten this far if it wasn't for your undying love and support!

So without further ado...(because I swear this sounds like I'm standing on a stage accepting an award...ROTFL!) I present....




Ebony is a smart, sexy, career-oriented black woman who wants nothing more than a summer fling with a man who challenges her mind and body. What she doesn’t expect is a blond haired, blue-eyed bass player—who won’t take “no” for an answer—to accept the challenge. 

When Ebony’s attempt at a brief fling turns into more, despite negative reactions from friends and family, she finds juggling love, family, and career are nothing compared to the ultimate betrayal she endures. Now her dreams spiral into lies and secrets that threaten her future and her best friend’s trust. 


Amazon     Barnes & Nobel     Smashwords   iTunes (coming soon!) 

Available in eBook, but paperback is coming soon! Don't have an eReader  yet? Don't worry! There are FREE KINDLE APPS for your laptop, iPad, Tablet, and Smartphones? There's even one that allows you to read on your browser!



Don't forget the blog tour! For blog stop information and information about the contest, check this link for details!!!! Drop by, say hi and don't forget to comment! (See contest rules! Every comment gives you the opportunity to win!)

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Oh yeah, there's a PARTY OVER AT MY PLACE!!! Well, my Facebook Author Page that is! Drop by and say hi! I'll be there from 8pm-10pm EST! See you there! 




MJ

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Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Interview with Candace Shaw!

Recently I had the privilege of meeting the very talented author, Candace Shaw, who has published her second book, The Game of Seduction, the second novel in the Arrington Family Series. It is the follow up to her Amazon Bestseller, Cooking Up Love. Thank you for stopping by Candace!



Every writer has their own story as to why they chose to write.  What inspired you?
 I have a very vivid imagination and plenty of ideas and stories in my head that I want to get out. I believe it has to do with the fact that I grew up as an only child. I always played with my Barbie dolls and made up fabulous scenarios for Barbie and her friends to experience.  Now my heroines are experiencing my imagination. In the end, I think they’re happy with my choices for them.

Do you have a day job, and if so, how do you fit in time to write?
No. I write full-time.

I have a purple amethyst stone that sets on my desk to encourage creativity. Do you have any special rituals you do to get ready to write?
I honestly do not have any special rituals to get ready. But I do listen to music for inspiration.

Are you a pantser or plotter?
I start out as a plotter but along the way I tend to change my mind and other ideas will pop up while I’m writing. For example, in my latest release, The Game of Seduction, I was wrapping up a scene with the heroine who was on the phone with one of her girlfriends. Well all of a sudden there was a thunderous knock at the door, and my hero was standing on the other side it. Like my heroine, I was surprised as well. Neither us were expecting him!

As writers, we often find inspiration from news events, people we know, or even our own life experiences.  Do any of your stories reflect parts of your life experiences?  Can you share and example?
In my books, I do incorporate bits and pieces of things I’ve experienced or people that I know. In my first book, Cooking Up Love, the hero was a chef who owned a southern style/soul food restaurant but believed in healthy eating, so his recipes reflected that.  His character was inspired by my grandfather who was also a chef who owned a soul food restaurant but with healthy recipes.  In my latest book, The Game of Seduction, the heroine Bria, is a traditional medical doctor who also practices alternative methods such as acupuncture. I prefer alternative routes whenever possible as well and received acupuncture treatments for almost two years.  I incorporated my alternative medicine beliefs into my heroine.

As an author, do you have any advice to share with others who just started their own publishing journey?
As a newly published self-pub romance writer, it wasn't exactly something that happened over night. I started writing my first novel in the summer of 2006, and I sent it off to a few publishers the following summer. I received about three rejection letters, and I didn't understand why. I put writing romance on the back burner, but in 2009 I decided to join Georgia Romance Writers, a chapter of Romance Writers of America. That was one of the best moves I’ve ever made. As an aspiring author, one should surround themselves with authors who are aspiring and published. As an educator, I only had educator friends, including my husband. But by joining a writer's group, I became exposed to a world that I knew nothing about. I saw my book in a whole new light after receiving critiques from published authors as well as attending conferences and workshops. Also, find a critique partner or critique group that writes in your same genre. They will give you honest opinions about your work and help you work out the kinks. Also, find a published author in your genre that is successfully published to guide and mentor you along. Listen to any advice they give you.

What are your current projects?
My second book, The Game of Seduction was released on August 28th.  It’s the second book in the Arrington Family series. It’s about Dr. Bria Arrington, an allergist who works for her family’s medical practice. Much to her father’s dismay, she prefers to incorporate naturopathic medicine with traditional for her patients. She wants to practice freely, but her father is against it, therefore Bria is contemplating accepting a position in Atlanta at a medical practice that will allow her to do both. On top of all that, she’s falling for her best friend the handsome, arrogant, mocha-covered playboy, Rasheed Vincent. An ex professional basketball player, he is a self-proclaimed bachelor after his fiancĂ©e left him when he opted to retire after a knee injury. This book definitely has some hot scenes and more of a sexy tone unlike Cooking Up Love, which was more of a fun and flirty tone, in my opinion. You can check out an excerpt below.

I’m also reworking the first book I wrote in 2006 about an interior decorator, Megan Chase (cousin to the Arrington family), who is being pressured by her family and friends to date even though they don’t realize how happy she is being single. Her friend, Congressman Steven Monroe, who is running for the US state senate, is being pressured by his campaign team to settle down with one woman. He’s a self-proclaimed bachelor, switching women all of the time like George Clooney. It’s sort of chick lit and contemporary romance. The book is titled The Perfect Candidate for Love and will be out summer 2013

Blurb:
Dr. Bria Arrington has had her heart broken by one bad boy playboy and doesn’t want to travel down that road again. However, she finds herself attracted to her best friend, self-proclaimed bachelor, Rasheed Vincent. After a passionate kiss leaves them desiring more, seducing each other is the only cure.

A retired basketball player, Rasheed is a player on and off the court. When a woman gets too close, he bounces to the next one. But the condition he’s in makes him want a permanent dose of Bria’s love, and he’s ready for the shot. She knows falling in love with Rasheed is a prescription for trouble, yet she’s willing to risk it. But can she trust him with her heart?



The Game of Seduction Excerpt: 

Rasheed leaned against the wall in the VIP section sipping on rum and Coke and trying hard not to stare at Bria. Her short black dress was hugging her lethal curves, and he wanted to take it off and wrap her cocoa legs around his waist while she called out his name repeatedly. He tried to pretend to flirt with the groupies passing by, but they weren’t doing anything for him. Bria had awakened a passion and lust in him that he couldn’t ever remember feeling before. Her long hair fell over her right shoulder in a sexy manner, and he imagined running his hands through it or holding onto to it as he gave it to her from behind. The night before, he couldn’t sleep. The thought that she actually needed and wanted her flames of desire extinguished, prevented him from resting peacefully and filled his mind. Images of her naked mocha-kissed body next to him invaded his brain all night, and the erection that prevailed only went away after a cold shower.
Rasheed downed the rest of his drink, sat the glass on the table, and walked over to her as she held a conversation with Raven.
“Excuse me, ladies. Bree, do you wanna go dance?”
“Sure.” Bria excused herself from Raven and walked onto the dance floor.
The DJ was playing an upbeat party mix that included Lady Ga Ga, Jay-Z, Beyonce, and Rihanna. Rasheed danced behind Bria, grinding on her to the fast beat. He was surprised she hadn’t resisted, especially when he pulled her by the hips close to him and a hard-on started to manifest, but she continued dancing, swishing her butt on him in an erotic manner as if they were naked and joined together. When Rihanna’s “Rude Boy” came on, she turned around to face him and sung the entire song as she continued her seductive dance on him.
He bent down and whispered in her ear.
“You keep doing that, you’ll find out how rude this boy is. Because trust me, baby, I’m more than big enough, but the question is, can you take it?” He gave her a slow grind so she could feel exactly how hard he was.
She looked up at him from beneath her lashes with a sexy, confident expression on her face.
“I can handle all of you.” She caressed the back of his neck, and he knew it was time to go before he pulled up her dress on the dance floor.
“Let’s get out of here,” he groaned as his erection hardened more by her confident words.
Once in the limo, Bria straddled his lap and her dress rose around her hips to reveal a pair of black lace panties. His lips sought out hers, and he kissed her slow, nibbling on her bottom lip.
“I’ve been aching to kiss you again, Bree,” he said. He pulled her tongue further into his mouth, savoring the sweetness of it and feeling himself completely losing his mind. “You have the sexiest lips that I can’t get enough of.”

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Wednesday, August 29, 2012

1st Person, 3rd Person, Omnipotent…Which One Are You?- Part 2


A few weeks ago, I shared information and examples of the three popular forms of point of view writing. If you missed it, follow this link.  

How do you know which one is best for you?

Over a year ago, when my writing journey began, my writing was all over the place as I tried to decide what POV to use. Nearly every author I read wrote in 3rd person. Some broke down each characters actions and thoughts by separating their voices with the use of chapter breaks. Others used scene breaks. Some did neither and head hopped.

 As a reader, none of the differences in their writing styles bothered me. As long as the story was good, and I was able to decipher the differences in character, I was pleased.

As a writer, I see things differently. 

Most writers, when starting out, strive to emulate the writing style of our favorite authors. Nora Roberts was my first introduction into reading romance, so I wrote the way she wrote.  What came out was what I thought of as a seamless flow of character(s), all thoughts and emotion in a scene. In other words, telling the story from the POV of all characters involved in the scene. There were no chapter breaks. There was no defining moment of a character POV changed. The scene progressed with the POV of all major characters involved.

The first book I read that used the 1st person POV was, don’t laugh, Twilight. I enjoyed getting deeper into the characters mind and seeing the story told from the way Bella saw it. Yes, it was biased and no one else’s personal opinions were understood beyond what she felt or imagined them to be, but after years of head hopping, it was refreshing. My favorite book in the series is Breaking Dawn where we were introduced to Jacob’s POV when Bella was unable to speak. Talk about exciting! ‘Hearing’ his crazy thoughts and not just being told by Bella what his actions were, we got to got to know his goals, motivations, and inner conflicts. Too bad we never got to see the same happen with Edward!

(I have no examples to offer when it comes to Omnipotent works because I can’t think of one, though I am sure over the years I have read a few. If I’m not mistaken, this form of writing is typically found in English literature. My understanding is that it is not a popular style chosen by authors today. I could be wrong, so forgive me if I am. )

It wasn’t until I attended a writer’s workshop that I truly learned how do decide what POV works for me. The instructor said this: take a scene, write it in 3rd person, then write it in 1st person. Read it aloud. How does it sound? Does if flow smoothly, does it sound rushed? Can you, the writer, identify with the character, does the voice sound natural? Which one do you feel the most comfortable writing? 

For me, it was 1st person.

Writing in 1st person allows me to experience my characters emotions and thoughts as if they were my own. With 3rd person, I feel as if I’m on the outside looking in, as if there’s a glass door allowing me to peer into my characters without knowing how they truly feel. My writing style allows me to step into the character’s skin, their clothes, and their lives. I feel their emotions as if they were my own. I taste, hear, see, smell what they experience. I become them to the point that when the scene I’m writing is a happy one, I am happy. If they are in pain or sad, I cry, literally, right along with them. At times I am so wrapped up in my writing voice that my family will walk by and as if everything is okay. It is then that I know I’ve truly channeled my characters voice. I never connected with my characters that way when using 3rd person. (can anyone say straight jacket? lol) 

I have heard many say 1st person writing should be for YA novels, not adult fiction, and definitely not romance. Why? Because 1st person stories are told from just one characters POV. If the plot is not entertaining and the supporting characters strong enough to interact with the leading character, readers can get bored, quick. My hat goes off to Janet Evanovich who seems to have mastered the single 1st person narrative. Her Stephanie Plumb novels are highly entertaining, and her characters easy to fall in love with. The entire series is told by Stephanie Plumb alone. Her witty remarks, quick wit, mixed with the colorful cast make reading her latest exploits something to look forward too.

I found my writing style by taking the best of all my favorite authors and developing my own style of writing 1st person.

The goal of my stories is to show the depth of the heroine and the hero’s evolution as they progress through the novel. There’s no head hopping. There’s no confusion as to who’s speaking, or what they really feel. I use chapter breaks, not scene breaks to separate the two. And occasionally, when story calls for it, I introduce a third person’s viewpoint to break it up a little, but not just for the fun of it. Each character is planned and serves a purpose. My goal is that the reader is well aware of everything each of the characters have experienced throughout, good, bad, and the oh so fun in-between.

How does the publishing industry feel about the use of the various POV’s? Each genre is different, but since I write romance, I can tell you this: it’s frowned upon. During my querying process, I had an agent, who loved the story, tell me there were a few things she wanted me to change, but the biggest was switching from 1st person, to 3rd person. Her reason, the Big Six wouldn’t take an IR/Contemporary Romance/Women’s Fiction story unless it was written in 3rd Person.

Wasn’t. About. To. Happen. 

The Butterfly Memoirs are about the character’s personal experiences as told by them, like a memoir. The definition of a memoir is: an account of one’s personal life and experiences; autobiography. It would not be the same written as 3rd Person.

 Thin about it, do you write your diary in 3rd person?

I didn’t let that stop me. (By the way, a year later, as I prepared to query my manuscript, I sent it to the instructor whose writing class I took. She’s an author as well as an agent. After reviewing it, her comments were about technical issues. Never once did she say it should be changed to 3rd person).

The best advice I can give when deciding which POV to use when telling tell your story is this: learn the rules and use them. Discover which ones you can bend and bend them. Experience writing the scene from each point of view and decide which one sounds the best. Which one allowed you to channel your character the most? Then, tell the story the way you want it to be told. If it’s a little outside the box because you don’t want it to be the norm, go for it. Believe me, there are readers out there who feel the same way and will be happy to see support you.

My novel, A Heart Not Easily Broken, will be available September 20th. If you haven't yet, read the first chapter. After that, grab a copy and see how the use of 1st person has worked for me!

Until the next time, Happy Writing!


MJ

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Wednesday, August 15, 2012

1st Person, 3rd Person, Omnipotent…Which One Are You?- Part 1


Deciding on the correct Point of View (POV) for your manuscript can be tricky.

One of the best analogies I've heard refereed to POV as the 'camera' in motion that shows the reader what is going on.


Who's camera will you use?    

Do you stick with the traditional one person  POV and use the hero or heroine's eyes? Do you allow more than one character to tell the story and see it from multiple angles? Or do you take on the role of narrator and tell the story from a distance allowing the reader to be privy to events the characters are unaware off?

And when you decide which character(s) have the spotlight, is their voice in 1st person, 3rd person, or omnipotent?

What are the definitions of each POV?

To learn more about each POV, visit the links to read more on About.com, Fiction Writing.

This point of view is from one character which serves as the narrator. Use of the words “I” or “we” distinguish this voice. It allows the readers to “see” and “feel” what this character sees and feels because you’re in that character's head. 

This point of view allows for more than one character to tell the story. This is the most common form used in writing. Use of the words “he” or “she” distinguish this voice.

This point of view has a god-like quality because the narrator has knowledge of the thoughts and feelings of all the characters in a story.  It can become confusing since at anytime the reader can find themselves in the  POV of any character in the scene. If used, each individual voice should have separate scenes to avoid confusion.  Use of the words “he” or “she” are still used. 

Choosing which POV you use will change the voice of your characters and determine your writing style. My personal preference is to write in 1st person. I chose that POV for the voice of my characters for two reasons. First, my series is titled, The Butterfly Memoirs, which symbolizes the evolution of the characters as the book progresses. Since it is their story, or memoir, I wanted their voice to be clearly heard during the course of the events. My original manuscript was written in 3rd, but I found it impossible to portray thoughts and emotions to the depth I wanted without using the words “I” and “me”.


As an example of the differences in the POV voices, I will demonstrate with the opening lines of A Heart Not Easily Broken:  

In 3rd person: 


“This is the last time I wear this dress.” Ebony Campbell stated, a hint of irritation in her voice.
“Oh, please,” Yasmine, her best friend and roommate, leaned over and yelled.
The music pounding out of the nightclub’s speakers made it nearly impossible to hear her.
“Stop fidgeting. You look uncomfortable,” Yasmine added, winking at the bartender who handed them their drinks.
No matter how many times Ebony adjusted the hem of her dress, it was impossible to ignore the warm air tickling the backs of her thighs as people pushed past her in the crowded bar. It would take more fabric to keep her shapely derriere from involuntary exposure.


That was a simple change of pronouns: “I” to “Ebony”, and “me” to “her”, with a few additional action tags. I am so used to writing from ‘inside’ of the characters head that I had to change my mindset to make it work!


Now, here’s the same scene in Omnipotent:

“This is the last time I wear this dress.” Ebony Campbell said. Her irritation was evident in her voice.
“Oh, please, Ebony,” Yasmine, who was her best friend and roommate, had to lean over and yell.
The music pounding out of the nightclub’s speakers made it nearly impossible for them to hear each another.
“Stop fidgeting. You look uncomfortable,” Yasmine winked at the bartender who handed them their drinks. She really wished her friend would shut up and get with the program. 
No matter how many times Ebony adjusted the hem of her dress, knowing she would never be able to ignore the warm air tickling the backs of her thighs as people pushed past her in the crowded bar. She knew it would take more fabric to keep her shapely derriere from involuntary exposure.


I'll be the first to admit that this point of view can be confusing! What was the difference? The use of pronouns was the same, “she”, “they”, except now the ‘voice’ is not just from Ebony's POV. Yasmine’s thoughts/action would only be mentioned as an observation by Ebony if it was written in 1st or 3rd person. The POV character of the scene (Ebony) would have no clue that Yasmine was irritated by her comments...unless this was paranormal then she could be psychic and read her mind.....see what I mean? Confusing! 


Now here is the exact same scene in 1st person:


“This is the last time I wear this dress.” (No action tag needed. Her voice automatically tells you her mood)
“Oh, please, Ebony,” Yasmine, my best friend and roommate, yelled in my ear.
The music pounding out of the nightclub’s speakers made it nearly impossible to hear her.
“Stop fidgeting. You look uncomfortable,” she added, winking at the bartender who handed us our drinks.
No matter how many times adjusted the hem of my dress, it was impossible to ignore the warm air tickling the backs of my thighs as people pushed past me in the crowded bar. It would take more fabric to keep my shapely derriere from involuntary exposure.



Can you see the difference? None of the POV's were better than the other, it's all in how you want to tell the story and what voice you give your characters. 

How do you know which one is best for you? How does the publishing industry view writing in those POV's?

Be on the look out for part two of the series where I will share a few more facts about the difference in point of view!


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